Creative Writing story

Penelope is a black belt. She can do that flippie thing in that air and break a board. She could also break a board with her head. But, when she wasn’t learning tai-cuan-do she was a ninja. When she was 6 she went to Japan on vacation, but her parents both died in a plane crash. She can speak Japanese! But there was one problem Penelope was a loud ninja. The head ninja told her if she didn’t learn to be quiet she couldn’t be a ninja anymore, so Penelope went to America to try to figure out how to be a quiet ninja. She had a flashback of her 2 parents dying and she started to hyperventilate, so she decided to take a boat to America. So two days later, she boarded the one of the biggest cruise ships in the word, the Titanic 2.The boat ride took 2 and ½ weeks. From the coast of Japan to the Coast of California. By the time the ship hit land Penelope was already running to get off the boat, she was so sick. The first thing she saw when she got to America was the biggest McDonalds she had ever seen, so she decided to go check it out. As she walked in she was greeted by 5 obnoxious kids playing tag by the doorway. Then as she took one more step in a soccer ball flew right past her head. She took one more look at the two story McDonalds and walked right out, planning to come back when all of the kids were gone.
“Wow” she thought, “I haven’t been here since I was little and it is so different” Then she saw her hotel and rental car place about a half a mile away so, she took a taxi their so she could put her stuff down and get a car. When she got to the hotel she went up to her room and put her stuff down. “ Wow this is amazing” she said as she looked at the giant chocolate fountain in the corner, and the towels folded like elephants. Then she saw the best thing of all their, on the deck there was a huge hot tub with jets. After that she had to go get her rental car, and as soon as she got to the parking lot she found out that they had already rented out the car she wanted. They decided to give her any car she wanted so she got a baby blue convertible. So she drove her baby blue convertible all around Hollywood looking for celebrities. Then she saw Brittney Spears with her bodyguards. So it was finally 9 o’clock when all of the kids had left McDonalds, so she went back there. This time when she walked in it was quieter and more peaceful. The only people there was an elderly couple, drinking coffee. So she went upstairs into the play land. She climbed through the tiny tunnels quietly on my elbows until I got to the top by a huge swing. The top of the play ground was open so she used the swing to swing myself onto the top of the tunnels. She landed on the top quietly and gracefully. She then walked around for a while and then she remembered something. The reason she was in America was to become a quiet ninja, and if she didn’t even try to be quiet you couldn’t even hear her move. So she returned back to Japan and she was the quietist ninja in the whole group. Everyone was jealous and they wanted to go to America and become quieter too.