Creative Writing story

“It’s that time of year again for the one and only town fair” said the man delivering the newspaper.
“This year featuring the biggest roller coaster in the world, the giant fall.”
“Can we go please mom” said my little sister.
“Yes, but only if you go on the giant fall” said my mom.
“We will leave tonight at 7 you can ask your friends if they want to come” she continued.
AT THE FAIR
“I can’t believe that it is finally time to go on the coaster, let’s go get in line” said my sister.
2 HOURS LATER
“Yes, were finally at the front of the line” said my sister
We load the load the cart and look ahead of us and see the twisty turny track and the giant hill in front of us.
As we slowly inch forward my sister screams “I don’t have a good feeling about this.”
Then, we start to go up the hill and all I can hear is click clack of the track.
Then I made a HUGE mistake, I looked down.
“OMG, don’t look down” I said shakily to my sister.
But, then she looked down and started to scream.
“Get me out of here, I don’t want to be here ahhhhhhhh” she screamed.
By then we had almost made it to the top of the roller coaster. At the top there was a small plateau.
“Yes, I am so relieved, said my sister we are almost to the top.”
“No, that’s bad, the worst part of the roller coaster is coming up” is said.
But then we started to slow down and then slowly pulled to a stop.
“Help help help” yelled everyone on the roller coaster.
My sister started to cry “Were never going to get out of here and were going to die.”
“I wonder if they even realize that were up here” said the guy in front of us. Then the next group of cars pulled up behind us and bumped into us. That caused us to plummet forward, down the hill. At the end we all ran off and saw that the people behind us were still up there. We called people for help and saved them. We were so shaken up we went straight home and went to sleep.