Dells story

As you walk up the stairs your heart pumps, you are about to ride the biggest rollercoaster in the Wisconsin dells. Your best friend Lucy is shaking next to you. She is just as nervous as you are. You inch closer and closer to the front of the line, and the closer you get the more you think about going back and not riding this rollercoaster. Finally after 51 nerve-racking minutes you get to the front of the line, and the creepy man taking tickets is smiling at you. Then suddenly a man that had just gotten off the ride staggered past you, trying to get to a garbage can before he puked. “Let’s not go on this ride and go on a different ride instead” said Lucy.
“ No we have been waiting for too long to just leave let’s just go on the ride” I said. So we got into the seat, and the bar came down. We were the only 14 year olds there. The rest of the passengers were like 10 years older than us.
As people were boarding the rest of the cars Lucy said “I have a bad feeling about this look ahead of us.”
“Whoa” I said as I look forward, there were 3 loop de loops and then a hill so high I couldn’t see the top because of the clouds. Then I saw something really terrifying, there were barf bags in front of us. “It almost like they expect up to puke” said Lucy.
Then the rollercoaster started to inch forward, and my heart skipped a beat. As go we go around the first loop I am already feeling nauseous. “I don’t feel so well” said Lucy, and then suddenly she pukes into the barf bag. Then we start to go up the gia nt hill slowly. Lucy was hyperventilating and I looked down and I could barely see the ground. The people that were on the ground looked like little ants they were so small. Finally we got to the top, and on the roller coaster track there was a little flat part before you would go down the hill. Then the coaster started to slow down and then eventually stop.
“I think we are stuck” I said, and then suddenly everyone was paralyzed. We couldn’t even see the ground! Nobody knew we were up there, and everyone thought we would all die. We sat there in silence then suddenly someone realized they had their cell phones. So they try to call 911 to come help them, but then someone pushed the car a little bit, and the phone flew out of their hand. We watched it as it as it plummeted toward the ground. Finally the people on the ground realized we were stuck, but they couldn’ t get us down we were so high.
“Help” said the guy in the front car, but his efforts were useless and no one could hear him. Then the same guy that thought the people could hear him if he yelled

To be continued...............................